https://youtu.be/dLAu41tddK0
Most of the feedback was very positive. They said i had a good dynamic energy and really showed that i cared about the pitch i was doing. Also they enjoyed my hand gesturing. I believe the positive feedback was important in fueling this pitch to be great.
The only real change i tried to make was to condense it from the last one. Secondly, I tried to be be a bit more fluid with my delivery of the pitch, unlike the last one that had some stutters in it. Other than that i didn't change much else.
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1. The moments of drudgery were the assignments requiring multiple interviews. Joyous experiences were being to complete all my work and the...
Hey trevor!
ReplyDeleteThis pitch is really good. you speak clear and are easy to understand. While the first two were also great, you have improved a great amount. You did a good job of shortening the time down and creating a 60 sec pitch.
Keep up the great work!
Hey Trevor, again man…great work on this elevator pitch. Your confidence is clearly evident in this version. You can tell you are invested in every aspect of your services success. I like how you elaborated about the pros of your service and how this service can travel on the sidewalk avoiding all other forms of congestion as well as the affordability compared to your competitors.
ReplyDeleteHell Trevor, Very good sales pitch. You did great work again and I feel every time you improve very much. Your confidence and gestures are awesome. You did a great comparison with Uber and how much more efficient and suitable your product is compared to the competition. Keep up the good work
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